Hi my name is Gemma This is my story I hope you like it I had a lot of fun making this
would you ever wright something like this?
Friday, March 27, 2020
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Hi Gemma, I love all the descriptive words you have used in your story. Well done!
ReplyDeleteHi Gemma, well done with this piece of writing. I love the way it flows and how you have used onomatopoeia (words that make a sound) such as chop... chop. Keep up the awesome work!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Gemma
ReplyDeleteWow you have used such exciting language with a great use of correct grammar, that is very impressive! I really enjoyed reading this, ka pai!